EXAMPLE POEM 1

Micky loved peaches.
He loved how juicy they were.
Quite often he’d just squeeze the juice over his face and laugh.
One day he squeezed so much juice on himself he couldn’t wash it off.
An hour later a swarm of bees stung him on the cheeks and forehead until he died.

This poem was written using the Carl Burkitt Poem formula.

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